Hi Dave
It looks like a tough subject to capture ... I like how you have frozen the water in the fountain but the positioning of the statues in the framing just don't work for me. I'm not sure I like the statues which doesn't help to draw me into either of the two fountain pictures.
What is it that you like about the scene that inspired you to take the picture, was it the fountain of water, the statues or both? Is this place near to you? If it is, I'd suggest working out what aspects of the scene that appeal to you the most and try to find an angle that brings out the best of that aspect/aspects.
For my eyes the pictures don't work, but its all subjective, so please don't get downhearted because the pictures don't work for me. Life wouldn't be so interesting if we all liked the same things.